redundantjacket

Okay, so the only other characters I've ever RPed have been either in non-fandom, original content games, or have been a super-minor character with no speaking lines and a pastede on yay! personality. So, this is my first time playing a real, canon character in an RP, and I would love any kind of constructive criticism.

Anything I'm doing wrong? Am I stepping out of character? Suggestions for improvements? Let me know!